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Nicole Paton's avatar

I love the way you brought it full circle at the end, with her squeezing his arm.

We all have such small lives when we look at them in perspective. I really wasn't expecting that metaphor at the end though - loved this!

Benjamin Akira Tallamy's avatar

Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to leave it open to interpretation, but still give enough breadcrumbs to piece things together. x